My proof from Amazon for Within arrived today. I ordered it on October 10, and it arrived today, October 21. It looks really good! Dave and I had found a few grammar/spelling errors so I’ve fixed those.

The only other problem we see is that the girl on the front is a bit too close to the right margin; she’s really close to being cut off. The spine is just a hair off too. So Dave is fixing that, thank goodness for him! <3 Otherwise, all looks well. It's a little strange, holding something that was merely words on the screen the week before! Hopefully we can get all the changes up soon and off to Createspace. I may have to request a second proof. We'll see.